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Ich Denke An Dich - English by ~Widerstehen:iconWiderstehen:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


In the evening the birds sing in the forest,
and in my mind I travel home to you;
In my heart, I am with you,
My soul, even though it is in me,
it is also with you.

Night,
In my sweet dreams,
I can almost feel your soft embrace;
and even though we're miles apart,
I feel your soft lips on mine

In the day after being forced from your loving arms,
I struggle through my life, to be with you once more,
and once more, I will be with you again;
in my dreams or with you safely in my arms.
©2008-2009 ~Widerstehen
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Author's Comments

This is not a literal translation, but it's one that actually makes sense...

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~pinballwitch Mar 3, 2008, 6:34:01 AM
Lovely work. Nice verbs to convey the sense of loneliness and wistfulness.

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"We are unfashioned creatures, but half made up." -Mary Shelley (Frankenstein)
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~Widerstehen Mar 3, 2008, 8:29:39 AM
Thank you... It would feel nicer if it was not how I actually felt...

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Bog je govoril skozi svojo vest, kat Jaz... Zavpijem ciljajte in ustrelite! Krvni davek postane višji! Smrtno kruljenje! Zavpijte, namerite, ustrelite!!

Precision shooting after too much Rakija is not advised unless suicidal.
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~pinballwitch Mar 4, 2008, 6:47:20 AM
Ah, well, there is that.

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"We are unfashioned creatures, but half made up." -Mary Shelley (Frankenstein)
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~Widerstehen Mar 10, 2008, 8:29:55 AM
The most beautiful poetry comes from pain...(Emo moment!)

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Bog je govoril skozi svojo vest, kat Jaz... Zavpijem ciljajte in ustrelite! Krvni davek postane višji! Smrtno kruljenje! Zavpijte, namerite, ustrelite!!

Precision shooting after too much Rakija is not advised unless suicidal.
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~pinballwitch Mar 11, 2008, 9:19:06 PM
Ah, they happen to us all, but I'm just having a tired moment right now...because I was way too uber-hyper-crazy-excited-overjoyed and ate WAY too much chocolate to celebrate...

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"We are unfashioned creatures, but half made up." -Mary Shelley (Frankenstein)
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~Widerstehen Mar 14, 2008, 4:55:57 PM
Chocolate?! TRAITOR!!! You offended the God of cheese! You will be eaten by a swarm of mice as vengeance against your treachery!! lol

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Bog je govoril skozi svojo vest, kat Jaz... Zavpijem ciljajte in ustrelite! Krvni davek postane višji! Smrtno kruljenje! Zavpijte, namerite, ustrelite!!

Precision shooting after too much Rakija is not advised unless suicidal.
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~pinballwitch Mar 14, 2008, 5:06:33 PM
:worship: :cheese:

Fear not, great one. I devoured you a mere 30 minutes ago.

Although I'm going to Asia soon, and who knows if I can readily find Chinese cheese? :o

--
"We are unfashioned creatures, but half made up." -Mary Shelley (Frankenstein)
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~Widerstehen Mar 14, 2008, 5:10:41 PM
Ach nein! The Chinese will kill you! You are Capitalist ;)

Carry this lucky charm (made of cheese) at all times!

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Bog je govoril skozi svojo vest, kat Jaz... Zavpijem ciljajte in ustrelite! Krvni davek postane višji! Smrtno kruljenje! Zavpijte, namerite, ustrelite!!

Precision shooting after too much Rakija is not advised unless suicidal.
:iconpinballwitch:
~pinballwitch Mar 15, 2008, 3:58:39 PM
I don't think I can carry it with me for too long without eating it out of desperation...I can see it now, me stranded in the middle of China, saying "MUST EAT CHEESE. MUST EAT CHEESE." and freaking out all the locals.

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"We are unfashioned creatures, but half made up." -Mary Shelley (Frankenstein)
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